I Needed You [Nonet]

I love how you wrote this. The only mistake I see is when you say " it had vanished fast" I thinl had should be has. Just what I see. Anyway overall this is a great poem. I love how you make it seem like your heart is a person and it whispers with sadness. It's very difficult when you want someone to hold your hand back but they are not there. I see this as a nightmare you had or even a reoccurring dream. I love how you put tears in here as well. The ending is very sad as well. I love the tone throughout the whole poem. You did well again.