Comments : A Child's Trip to the Circus

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Congratulations on winning the club contest with this poem. You did a good job of pulling me into your experiences before, during and after the circus. It felt like I was right there at the circus, enjoying it for myself. To me that is what a writer needs to do, pull me in and make me a part of the story. Good job.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Congratulations :)) You really did a great job ;)

    I love every detail in this and the tone and feel of the whole poem ;) Great Job 5/5


  • 7 years ago

    by Ray Blue


    Start to end, still wowed:-)

    Great work!

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You really know how to draw readers into your world and make them see what you see. Excellent..and congrats on the win!

  • 7 years ago

    by Breely

    Loved the way you brought the circus to life with your powerful words, I felt as if I was there, could see and smell everything and feel the ambiance. I loved it. Very well written :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I am so glad this won. This is why I nominated it. The imagery is stunning through out and the wording tells a very real story that is vivid and plays well inside our minds. Congrats again and I loved this a lot :). Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You have such a great gift.

  • 7 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Well well i'm in shock this is good piece 5\5

  • 6 months ago

    by M.Useless

    Excellent. I could smell the sickening sweetness of cotton candy, hear the screams of delight, the gasps, the oohs and the ahs from the crowd. Very nice.