Congratulations on winning the club contest with this poem. You did a good job of pulling me into your experiences before, during and after the circus. It felt like I was right there at the circus, enjoying it for myself. To me that is what a writer needs to do, pull me in and make me a part of the story. Good job.
Loved the way you brought the circus to life with your powerful words, I felt as if I was there, could see and smell everything and feel the ambiance. I loved it. Very well written :)
6 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
I am so glad this won. This is why I nominated it. The imagery is stunning through out and the wording tells a very real story that is vivid and plays well inside our minds. Congrats again and I loved this a lot :). Well done.