Comments : May Was Dressed In Pastel

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Congratulations on taking 2nd place in the club contest about going to the circus. You took the trip to the circus through a wonderland of nature, with the flowers. More into the emotions of the animals, the people at the circus, the ringmasters and other performers, and always bringing in the flowers. Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~Full of life and substance!

    Very marvelous! 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by dalllllal

    Wonderful wonderful poem i enjoyed this very much your way of writing is very unique and catches the small details in simple put words. great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    That last stanza did the whole poem for me, congrats on coming second. We were just one point away. I like your comparisons. And how you take advantage of figurative language, though I do feel that if you made it a little bit clearer like the last stanza, the whole poem would be more than marvelous. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats on the 2nd place win and you surly gave the reader a very vivid journey with colors and emotions..well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gwen Davis

    Very nice work. I can't say one bad thing about it. Well done!