With time
by Yakari Gabriel Dec 31, 2013
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Eventually, you're going to find yourself a woman that's voiceless. She'll be so vacant, probably drive you to madness complaining about vain things like nails. When you go to the store, you'll pay. She'll wait for you to do everything, kiss you in front of everyone else and give thanks in obnoxious ways, you'll debate with her |
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10 years ago
by Narph
Yaaaakiiiii put this into poetic format, would you?
It's so frickin good and I just want to see more line breaks, ughhhh.
Haha, to be fair, this piece is rockin'. Your voice is so clear and biting... I feel like these words are exactly what so many women long to say to the men in their lives. I especially love the first line, awesome way to start. Now add some line breaks, sheesh.
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10 years agoby Britt
I just simply adore this poem, there's no two ways about it. I love how you made it so obvious this woman is all about him, but really she never challenges him. It's routine, it's boring, there's no spark, no fire, no passion. No relationship can ever last when it's as stale as that, and even though that's what people think they want, they truly don't. Love this!!
