I don't see how anyone could be sad around you. I'm happy to see you wrote something. :) keep up the good work and smile for me. :)

I love it. It's very very good.

Good heavens, Ren, this reduced me to tears.....almost, lol.
Truly, this had me captivated throughout and the rhyming and flow are a pleasure to read.

Great write - all the best,
Ben

Ren, this is so delicately written yet so sad and full of emotion. Though long you kept the rhythm, flow and beat throughout. I like the centre structure to, it gives it a better feel.

We are all but beautiful strangers in our own rights.

Em

I love this, we're I able to nominate this I most certainly would.

Fantastically conveyed emotion and thought

the mood of this piece goes up and down and changes like a symphony.
well penned my dear friend.

what a wonderfully written piece, very emotive & expressive x

Couldn't help but think of my grandfather at his end... beautiful message. I think you have a talent for making words that aren't supposed to rhyme, sound like they do. It eats at my OCD and makes me jealous at the same time : D

Ren, I really liked this a lot. I was totally engrossed the entire read. Really nice rhyming through out. Wasn't sure if this stranger was there to harm you or just make an appearance in your life. Well done!

Wow. There is a lot of emotion here! It flows well which you don't see often with rhyming poems... none of it seems forced, or interferes with your story. Love it!

Dear Cowgirl, what a beautiful, excellent piece! First of all, the title is brilliant, and the message of the poem kills me. The flow is absolutely beautiful and I must agree with Alec, not forced, but all the emotions just seem to tumble out with the unfolding of every line! Agree with Frank totally, this is like reading a symphony! Wow may fall short to describe how amazed I am of your talent. I am not only impressed, I appreciate you even more. Added to favorites!

Much love, Lady Mel Liz.

I feel the wonderment of this poem for the stranger from afar, great piece. Love it!

Fabulous, a wonderful piece, rhyming and imagery couldn't be better. Great job x