Yelling At You

by Melody   Feb 13, 2014


It starts with a question,
Simple and plain,
That blossoms,
Grows into frustration,
Begins a search,
Starts an argument,
Causes heated words,
Yelling the answer,
Being ignored,
Hating it,
Leaving,
Walking away,
Hiding.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Theresa Ford

    What makes this so good is it is simple. However, having said that ;your choice of words causes a person to feel that they are in the moment and if not they understand how futile it was to even have argued Great Job.

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    To the point

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    The words you use here make this poem amazing. There are not many people who could write a poem like this and still keep the readers attention without getting bored, but you did it so perfectly!

    • 10 years ago

      by Melody

      Well thanks :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Misundertood

    The fight that you can walk away and show restraint is the fight you won don't get me wrong i done stupid things in my life but good read and again great word fraising

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The string of wording is okay. It does go together well to me. Like an argument it starts off slowly then it builds and builds. I like how you did it here too. You start off light asking a question and then it goes and goes. The middle is the anger. And then the ending is filled with hatred and tears. I really enjoyed the emotions you talk about in the deeper meaning. :) well done.

    • 10 years ago

      by Melody

      Thank you :)