Lost love

by Rsan   Mar 20, 2014


Me and you
I wish it were true
So if I would be alone
Held from you by this fathomed world
Your voice would still echo
In my heart like a circle

Need I say more,loved one?

Even in the darken most times
Endless voices of yours would rhyme
Then I remembered that
You and I were lost and apart
Once close friends
Until you shattered my heart

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Rsan,

    Such a beautiful yet saddening poem. A love that is lost is always hard yet writes poetry like this.

    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks for taking your time on this Em..

  • 11 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    Last stanza it should be "darkest" not "darken" but that slight error it's beautiful it really is 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Rsan

      I often confuse such words bUt thanks very much..!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by XxMsMoonLightxX

    Very Beautiful

    • 11 years ago

      by Rsan

      Hahaa yeah..thank you

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Sad ending, but a beautiful write. 5/5 :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Rsan

      Well..thnks for taking your time avery:-)

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