Leaves on showers

by Rsan   Apr 17, 2016


A mighty leaf lies
Its last blossom
hanging, defeated

A drop of dew
With tender hue
hanging, shaken

Leaves rustling against rain
Its despairing cry
hanging, astray

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    Short and sweet... great imagery with a good sense of emotion. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Rsan

    A delicate little nature poem, dripping with lovely imagery and great language.
    Well written and tightly structured, this is as pleasing to view as it is to read.

    All the very best
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Rsan

      Many thanks for taking your time Ben. Much appreciation

  • 9 years ago

    by Rsan

    Why , thanks for taking your time Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    A very meaningful and well written piece here. Nature is a wonderful thing.
    Em

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