I love....

by Eibutsina   Jul 4, 2004


What do i love about you
Well where can i even start
I love how your always willing to help
And how quickly you open up your heart
I love how you stay so strong
No matter what the world throws your way
I love that on my bad days you can make them better
And know exactly what to say.
I love the way your carefree
Your so enthusiastic and motivated
I love how you do the exact opposite
To what ive anticipated.
I love that you can make me laugh
And the way you make me smile
It doesn't matter the distance between us
The kilometers or the miles.
I love the way you make feel
You make me a better person inside
I love the trust we have in each other
The fact that we have nothing to hide.
I love how your so happy
Happy with what you have got
And that your always aspiring
To reach for the very top.
I love the way you support me
No matter what im going through
Most of all i love how you love me
And how i can't live without you....

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "I love how your always willing to help "
    -should be "you're"
    "I love the way your carefree
    Your so enthusiastic and motivated"
    -should be "you're" for both of them :-)
    "I love how you do the exact opposite
    To what ive anticipated."
    -I think that makes more sense if it reads "of what I've anticipated." instead of the 'to.'
    "I love how your so happy
    Happy with what you have got
    And that your always aspiring "
    -It should be "you're" in the first and last lines

    Despite those little errors, I felt that your poem flowed remarkably well. I especially feel that your rhymes were very fluid, and you made some unexpected ones, like smile/miles. I'd just make those corrections I listed above and this poem would be pretty darn good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks Erika your support is priceless

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem, I really like all your poems, they're really good. I think this one is my favorite, but I can sort of relate to most of them in some way. Great Job! Keep writing!

    ~*Erika*~

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