Moon and I

by Stargirl   Apr 25, 2014


Only now
Have I realized
The parallels between
The moon and me
Both possess uneven exteriors
The moon has craters
While I have scars
On some days
Both feel like revealing only
A part of ourselves
Quarter, half, full
All dressed up, casual, barefaced
But most of all
Both cast light
Despite the darkness
Of the night sky
And of life

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love the layout of this poem. And although I am not a fan of unpunctuated work, it didn't seem to bother me with this piece as much as it does usually with others.

    I really liked the message here, and the scenery that you created, you connected emotions and nature very well. I always feel the moon is a good tool to use in writing, we can always find ways to connect ourselves to it, or to connect the moon to something in our life.

    Really great job here!

    • 9 years ago

      by Stargirl

      Thank you so much. This means a lot. I'm going to try punctuating poems next time. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon

    Aww this is beautiful, the comparisons you've drawn up are flawlessly worded :)

    There are some dark tones throughout the poem but it ends on an uplifting note. I love it haha :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Stargirl

      Thank you so much! It means a lot! :)

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