by Amberinaa Jun 3, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Just pop another pill, these feelings will fade away. |
by Em
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As jack said this is catchy and read aloud does seem like a song with great rhythm. |
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This was a good display of emotion. It has a nice flow and catchy rhyme scheme as if it was a song. Good job |