by Robert Gardiner Jul 15, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Lily, Rapture Goddess, Of Enchantment... (A Sonnet) |
by LittleMsPink
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Aw this is definitely beautiful. <3 |
by Jyoti Rawat
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Full on rhymed poem. |
by mazzy star
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Omg! It's so beautiful. It should win weekly contest. |
by Meena Krish
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Its nice to read your poems after some time now and this Sonnet has been penned beautifully. I like the smooth flowing and the rhymes fitted nicely in each line...lovely read! |
by Baby Rainbow
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Bravo for the amazing effort on this tricky form, you have pulled it off amazingly, and I always feel the sonnet is one poem I can never manage myself. You have made this look so easy. I do enjoy how it is not flowing sentences as such, but rather broken up segments. It feels more vivid and creative this way, like it hold a lot more. |
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Thanks Baby Rainbow |