Lost letter

by Michael D Nalley   Aug 25, 2014


I was going to write a letter
but you know it seems I lost my pen.
To see your face would have been better,
though I could have lost my mind again.
You have torn my heart like the paper
I thought I'd lost along with my soul.
Do you think my feelings could tapper?
If you would ever lose your control?
Mentors forbid me to send letters
My master often forgives debtors

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Swear to God I started laughing at the beginnning of the stanza the first two sentences were hillarious I mean that kind of explains why you didn't write the letter lol funny poem and then it goes into the romance that a romantic poem (stanza) has to have great read hun! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 9 years ago

    by natasha

    Its really good but could use some more punctuation to make more effective xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem, description of feelings nice

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