Ramblings Within Me

by Cat   Oct 1, 2014


Why won't people talk to me?
I wonder if they hate me.
All the "friends" I had rarely talk to me.
Is there something wrong with me?
These are my ramblings that go on inside me.
I hope someday someone can help me.
They'll find me and say "It's over. You can rest now just lean on me and rest your weary heels. Believe in me."
This is what I wish for.
I can no longer go on anymore.
I'm done with everything.

This is what I honestly feel thanks for listening.

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  • 9 years ago

    by JesusFreakAuthor

    Awe I'm so sorry, I am always here for you no matter what, and by your side, and whatever you are going through I'm here to try and get you through it the best I can, huge hugs!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cat

    Im just depressed ; -;

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I love the honesty within this poem. Also to me the dialogue plays a nice role within this as well. It makes it more personal and more realistic. This seems to be narrated by your thoughts which is an excellent way to express your deepest feelings. Okay I also noticed you used past tense here which tells me that your friends are no longer your friends and in that you feel more depressed, and getting the help that you need is a great step. Realizing it sometimes is a very difficult thing. Though some people might not like your ending I did, because you explained why you want to "go away" because you lost all of your friends. All in all this poem is short but holds a strong impact on the heart of your readers. 5/5

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