5 Senses

by moon face   Oct 7, 2014


I have strived mountainously
to describe,

The taste of your mouth;
The outline of your hips;
The fragrance of your skin;
The stroke of your eyelashes;
The rock'n'roll of your heels;

but all I could ever come up with
was 67 poems
about the 67 freckles
mapped on your face.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Aaww this is so so so cute!!!! :-P

  • 11 years ago

    by WW

    I enjoyed the originality here. Its simple and sweet. It started off with me thinking that coming up with poetry aabout this individual must be difficult (I can relate) and jumps over to the plethora of poems you've come up with. That brought a lot of movement and action to the piece! Pretty awesome.

    • 11 years ago

      by moon face

      Thanks a lot Tarnish :D! Your comment made me really happy <3

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Aww.

    • 11 years ago

      by moon face

      I'm really glad someone as profound as you liked my poem. : )

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
    wawo nice poem.
    well done.

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