Shadowing Humans!!

by Zabadak   Oct 13, 2014


One of us is with each of them from the moment they are born!
They can see us in the light but not in the dark,
...but we are always there, watching them and waiting...until the end!

They don't know that we are the recorders and judges of their lives, right or wrong, good or bad!
They don't know that everything they do, to the smallest fraction of a millisecond, is noted and scrutinised!
They do not know that how they live in this world will affect the next!

...we are just the observers, judges for the record, for the reckoning!
We cannot interfere!

Only the creator of all things has the right to judge their lives...and reward or punish in the next life!

We are just their shadows and they do not know that the creator made us for this purpose alone:

...shadowing humans as human shadows!

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  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Very very creative..... I love this poem.

    I love this line the most...
    .shadowing humans as human shadows!

    Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Wow very powerful stuff. I love how you have shown how we all judge each other from when we are born but that we shouldn't because the one person that can is our maker. Well written. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Very creative, love it!!! :D 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Brilliant!!

    The idea behind the poem is very clever, very unique. It is so true in what you say, and it holds a lot of meaning to the world, and how children only learn to copy the adults in the world, who really only copied the adults in their world as they grew.

    I love the idea of humans being shadows, instead of the cliche black shadow that is on the ground and created by light.

    I thin it was a clever way to start the poem, by describing something that we did not know yet, but it held a mystery in that first stanza which we want to find out more about, and so we read on further where all is revealed as the poem comes to and end.

    Really loved this idea, and the play on words with the shadow humans is awesome!

    Very unique poem!

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