Sweeter Love

by Jyoti Rawat   Oct 16, 2014


Love gets more sweeter, if it is kept simpler

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Simpler love is kept, sweeter it becomes

or

Keeping love simpler is the key behind its sweetness

(Its quotes i post here because i want to know about other views.)

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well it all comes down to how two people will handle this
    relationship. When there is understanding, trust, and
    smiles without having to say it in words then love
    becomes sweet, sentimental and valuable.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jad

    Jyoti, I was a bit confused at first with what you were doing, but, at the end, I finally understood. Thanks for including your description of what you were doing. Now I would like to discuss each of the different interpretations that you present to us.

    1.) "Love gets more sweeter, if it is kept simpler"
    ^^^
    I don't necessarily think this one is true. Love may not grow chaotic or end in fighting every night, but if things are kept simple and never change, then I don't think love can grow at all. You may still have this love for this person, but you aren't going to love them more or grow closer to them.

    2.) "Simpler love is kept, sweeter it becomes"
    ^^^
    This is pretty much the same as the first quote you gave us. Love, again, is being kept at a simple level, but I don't think a couple can grow if they don't ever do new things or get into those arguments and those fights that are meant to break or make them.

    3.) "Keeping love simpler is the key behind its sweetness"
    ^^^
    This rewording almost takes a different stance on your two previous quotes, but it's almost the same. Now, if you are trying to say that just being honest with who you are and being yourself around other or with that special person, makes love more sweet then I totally agree. If you try to be someone your not or try too hard, then you are adding unnecessary conflict into the relationship. When two people love each other, they shouldn't be trying to adapt themselves to the other person or trying to be someone they are not. If both people are honest and keep things like that (simpler), then I can see and understand how their love grows in sweetness.

    Sorry if I seemed harsh or bashing. I really did enjoy all three quotes, but the last one is the one I liked the most. I hope you continue to write and learn from that experience. Great job and keep writing!

    • 9 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      Jad
      Thanx,
      First-All quotes meaning is same, These are three quotes with same meaning.
      I have written these quotes to tell every one, as simple way to you follow to love someone your love become more sweeter.
      Love does't mean do lots things. if somebody will understand your love in your simplicity, it means that he/she will always love you.

      Other wise love always keep change.

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