Try Me

by sera   Nov 12, 2014


Remember me?
Some girl you've played with
Bring back memories isn't it
That time i got hit..

I cant help myself
From falling for your lies
But like the real one
Those butterflies just passing by

You amazed me..
Day by day
Until i found out
Those words was only a part of your play

Ironic isn't it?
I've feel no pain
Just sitting there
Felt numb and it suddenly rain

I told you I've doubt
And it turns out to be true
I can't control it
I've built my own zoo

So I've figured it out
Why you always late
Well it turns out
That you are having a date

Finally every pieces
Has been gathered
Those trick u set..
Oh did I bothered?

I'm sorry it didn't work out
You and her
Oh never mind
I know you always have another

It's not normal
I don't cry and wet my tee,
I just look at the mirror
And say "Try Me"

R.I.R

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  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello.
    I know this is an older poem, but I like this rhyming style. It suits your words.
    I hope your mirror helps.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, wow, wow. This needs more views because it deserves them. I love that even throughout the pain you show optimism and inspiration.

    It's not normal
    I don't cry and wet my tee,
    I just look at the mirror
    And said "Try Me"
    ^^
    Love this last stanza as it's filled with optimism of not crying but asking the world to try you and they will but we get over it because we're stronger.
    I think 'said' should be 'say" though.

    All in all fantastic.
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by sera

      Im still learning so thank you ^^

      ive edited the part, thanks again ^^

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I'll come back and comment on this poem later I promise

    -Mori

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