The Vengeful Vixen

by La Reina De Corazones   Jan 17, 2015


She wore a sizzling cloth that seemed to stop mid-thigh
entered the bar showcasing a sexy pair of onyx heels
Smiling she lowered her eyelashes cloying,
sitting next to a man taking his first sip.

Ordering her shot of vodka she asked the bartender
to make it strong, turned to the side and laughed.
Hat hid half her face, but you could tell she was
a lady of magnificent grace

Thanked the man for her drink,
took a small sip and said in a seductive voice,
"Want to hear an interesting tale?"
He nodded yes, and she laughed darkly
"Oh honey, you should order another drink before this."

"My name was Morgana then,
yeah like the Morgana from the
King Arthur crap.

I was always blessed in life,
whatever I wanted I worked hard to get it.
Parents dotted on me;
People confined in my discretion,
all the time

Anyways this one night-
I went to a bar similar to this,
a man interpreted the sexual signs wrong.
I wasn't interested, but he thought differently."

She took a moment to sip her drink again
smiled, and this time is was drenched in darkness.
Started again in a melodramatic tone
just to mess with his head,

I got out of that bar
went home, took a shower.
Didn't think anything was wrong
was corrected of that thought ten seconds later,
the man from the bar was sitting on my couch!

Said and I quote,
'You teased me all night long but you walked away.
Nobody does that to me toots'

Yanked my towel off,
gagged me and viciously rapped me for hours.
To top it off, to cover his stupid mistake
he killed me, left me bleeding there on my floor of my house.'

He got scared it was plain to see
for, she was saying what only him, the woman he had slain in cold blood and God knew of,

This part should be a refresher for your memory:
If you don't remember who I am by now.
Hmm let's see, you dug a hole in the ground
And threw me there like I was garbage.

(Which we both know I wasn't, I didn't even die in dignity you stole that from me!)

She tilted her head up
mockingly grinned,
Leaned to whisper in his ear,
"The poison I slipped in your drink
should already have taken effect by now.
Now I'll pay you back in kind you bastard."

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem was okay. Not your best by far. The story was average, and it was hard to follow at some parts. It didn't really suck me in like I thought it would for a long poem. The ending was meh to me. I thought it could have been a lot better. A ghost story is better written. See she cannot die and be alive so that tells me that she is a ghost that is haunting the person who killed her. I will give you this, the imagery is lovely because it does paint you a picture in the head. and it is definitely the right category for it. Some of the lines were choppy and needed to add words to make it flow more. Especially some of the middle stanzas at the beginning of the sentences. I didn't care for the title much either. I think you could have just called it "Vengeful".
    Could be better in a lot of ways honestly.

  • 9 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Damn

    u definitely told a story of a vengeful vixen
    sounds like she has a right to be too :/

    idk I just really liked this

    you're a good writer keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Mayday

    This is actually a much shorter read then it appears!! Maybe that's just cause you have the reader hooked, leaning on the edge of their seat ;)
    But I think this was quite spooky o.o Ooooh Tooo Spookyy *Giggles* I liked how you literally had a movie reel playing in my head - it's cool and I like the times you set it in. Really gives it that cool, Jazzy Mysterious vibe! Can't wait for part 2 :)

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