Reverie (Sijo)

by GB   Feb 7, 2015


Reverie

Celestial kisses from womb of oblivion, in harmony.
Oh, beloved, my madness seeks for shelter, unforgettable,
a constellation of creeping beauty, I observe you.

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**Sijo is a classic form of poetry in Korea. Recently, some American poets have begun working with sijo.Three long lines. Each line varies between 14 and 16 syllables, with the middle line the longest.
The first line states a theme, the second line counters it, and the third line resolves the poem.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :O0

    Oh My,

    Ummmmmm.....This ....Ummmmmm....this is Amazing!!!!!!!!!! this form is new to me but i have to say you have written this so flawlessly i am in awe......just WOW!

    Saved to favourites.......just epic. :))))

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Samia,

    Your poem is a gentle and female tribute to once-in-a-lifetime Love.
    Only when we truly and deeply love do we feel the need to stay focussed on the other, both mentally and physically and drink in the wonder or who they are.

    A famous female mystic said that we do not open our eyes to reality over time with regards to the love we hold for the other, but we start to gradually fail to see the magic in them. I tend to agree:)

    Well done:) xx Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    I think the closing line wrapped this up nicely, with a bow. But the first line I think detracts from this write a little. Only because the other lines are incredible. A very fun poem to read aloud. Great work GB

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Done, Kudos!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oohhh :) Glad to hear! I hate to ramble on someone's poem and disappoint them with my analysis. <3

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