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So beautifully penned :) So true !!!! |
by yogi73
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I love the simple wisdom of this poem |
by Everlasting
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In my opinion, it's not the doubt that causes problems. I think is the lack of courage , or sensitivity, or care to communicate how we feel that creates problems. Doubt in itself is a good thing. It comes to strengthen our trust. And to arrive to the truth. However, One mustnt doubt just to doubt. If One doubts, let that be to arrive to the truth. |
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LUCERO your outlook to the word 'doubt' is so enlightening. Love your positive approach. |
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Wonderfully Penned Meena!!! |
by GB
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Fascinating how you doubled and reflected this format, the shape is pretty like the diamante. Darkly interesting theme as well, despite the simple wording. Very enjoyable, Meena. |
by Ray Blue
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Nice poem Meena! Doubts indeed can lead to breaking bonds but sometimes telling the truth could hurt the ones closes to you and may change them from who they are. Secret is like an anchor, the more you hold on, the more it gets deeper and heavier. |
by Jyoti Rawat
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Vawooooooomeena ji |
by Sandstorm
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Loved it. Refreshing form too :) |
by Ben Pickard
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Firstly, many thanks for your kind comments on some of my poems, and may I just say how true this poem is. Excellently written, too. |