Comments : Poetic Bloom (Collaboration)

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Beautiful you two, nominated!

  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    I added this poem to my favorites. I like reading this over and over the same way you listen to a new song you really like.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    The imagery and the metaphors makes this one an enjoyable read . Everlasting love ...........beautifully penned Dashiel:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the flow of this poem and the imagery it brings out to the mind. The two of you have written a lovely piece which brings out a tender love...nicely done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Thanks for the lovely collab.

  • 9 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Lovely imagery and an entrancing tale... perhaps whispers of tales.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is perfet

    Blue water blue
    let me climb
    where love resides;
    a four-leaf clover still pierces
    my foam heart.

    I love that so much! Always a pleasure to read your work Karla! and this collab is wonderful :] Great job both of you! -Nik