The Drunken Handling of Love

by Something   Jul 26, 2015


Eleven AM, hello world
Would you give us a little twirl

Last night, a mist of dodgey liquid and
drunken rambling to a girl whose love I'm handling like a irresponsible, unemployed unimportant twit. I said it.

Send her a text to apologise, she sees the text her heartbeat rise
-es Sorry darlin' i started rambling misunderstanding, irresponsible handling the love you accidentally gave, you were rather brave - foolish.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Again, I like the idea behind this poem - it has a strong theme, which I like in any form of art.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    The theme of intoxication is very evident throughout, the idea of love is a little blurred, perhaps infatuation? Or a one night stand? Not bad though :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Something

      The person irresponsibly handling the girls love, doesn't feel the same way. He's drunk so continues to pretend, only coming to sense the following morning.
      Thx for the comment

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