Empty Brain

by Jyoti Rawat   Aug 3, 2015


Empty Brain
Just like piggy-bank,
with some memory coins,
When empty,
Always sounds,

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this because I can relate as I suffer a lot of brain fog and when I am at my worse I am usually at my loudest lol

    Just like piggy-bank,
    ^^
    I feel you have missed 'a' before piggy-bank.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ha! Yup an empty vessel is far more noisy! Nicely penned and its true; whether it may be money or anything once empty its noisy. Good job!

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