by Baby Rainbow Aug 12, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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My promise of love |
by Ben Pickard
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What a heart breaking piece, Saffie. The last two stanzas are so emotional. The first two are read in almost nervous anticipation of what is to come, and then it builds into this crescendo of heartbreak. Sad, but beautifully written. Excellent stuff. |