Tiny little Drops

by Everlasting   Nov 23, 2015


I thought my thoughts were clear
like rivers flowing with streams
that never ceased to flow

but soon, I found these thought of mine to be
like currents slowing down its streams
becoming like a pond

where tiny toads just jump from here to there
just splashing in and splashing out my thoughts

from grasses green to grasses green
until my thoughts dispersed into tiny little drops

Nov 23, 2015 1:31 pm

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  • 9 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Love this!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    I get a happy feeling while reading this piece....the tiny toads just paint a picture for the minds eye that brings a smile to my face.
    Great job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such beautiful write

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "Where tiny toads just jump from here to there just splashing in and splashing out my thoughts"

    ^^^^^^

    What a wonderful line this is, in a thoroughly mesmerising poem. I love the alliteration of "tiny toads"! Nominated.
    All the best,
    Ben

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