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You actually have really good ideas with your haiku, so once you get the syllable count correct, they will be excellent!
All the best

Hi Jay,

This needs a little tweaking as it now has too many syllables on the second line and also the third line should be a statement all on its own, a real twist. The title is great, needs no work. I fooled around a little with the words, see what you think:

Stiff and creaking joints--
Nature's way of warning you.
"Beware of the Fall"

Take care,
Ingrid

Jay,

Again, lovely idea here. I think I counted 19 syllables, though and haiku must be no more than 17.
What about:
stiff and creaking joints
nature's warning you, "watch your
steps, here comes the fall."

By taking out the "way of" takes it to 17, I think. Just an idea - play around with it....you're almost there!
All the very best