What a beautiful little piece of poetry and great to see a new write from you.
With everything you post, you get better and better. This is delicate and skilfully put together and a real pleasure to read.
I am out of votes this week, but I promise I will not forget to nominate this piece come Monday!
All the very best and I hope you are well,
Ben.

Ps. I think this would be better in the Nature category, but either way, this is lovely

Its one of da most beautiful poem u have ever written.

Hey Shruti.

First let me say, am impressed.(it doesn't happen more often) with this beautiful piece.
I really like the layout and the choice of words used.
Worth the read.

Good imagery.

A snowflake was what came to mind when I was reading this piece. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.

Shruti

Well done on this win - much deserved!

Hello Shruti,

Ben told me about your win and how impressed he was with your writing. I must admit I thought he may have been embellishing the facts. I can categorically say he was not. You should be rightly proud of your win this week.

Well done you!

Take care,

Michael

Congrats on the win

nice to see a nature poem win.

There is a soft tenderness to this poem which makes the read effortless and at the same time gives that ahhh feeling. Nicely penned and congrats on the win :)

What a lovely visual poem it reminds me of snowflakes

Lovely piece... Well done!! 5/5

What a talent!!! The poem's just beautiful. "Congo!" you won.

What a talent!!! The poem's just beautiful. "Congo!" you won.

Such a magical piece

Congo for win although wishing u much late didn't have knowledge of this

This is just lovely. Breathtaking!!!