You and I

by Piper Lefebvre   Feb 29, 2016


I saw you stare at me in class
you looked away when i caught you staring

I saw through your glance like glass
you complimented me on what i was wearing

When our eyes met for just for a short time
my face turned beet red

I tried to talk to you but i was quiet as a mime
your smile i'll never dread

I know i wont have a chance with you
competing with all those pretty girls

When you said you liked me too
my heart filled with swirls

I was no longer a mime
you and i are forever

Till the end of time
our love fall apart? never

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Oh to be that girl again looking for the 'eye candy' haha brought back memories. A nice romantic poem.

    The 3rd stanza reads: 'When our eyes met for just for a short time, my face turned beet red.' I feel it would read better 'when our eyes met for that short time, my face turned beetroot red'

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Oh to be that girl again looking for the 'eye candy' haha brought back memories. A nice romantic poem.

    The 3rd stanza reads: 'When our eyes met for just for a short time, my face turned beet red.' I feel it would read better 'when our eyes met for that short time, my face turned beetroot red'

  • 9 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a delightful and romantic poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Tess and welcome to the site.

    This poem brings back many memories for me; staring at the pretty girls in class was ever more interesting than the work!
    This has a nice rhyme scheme that shows real promise for one so young.
    Well done, keep writing and all the best,
    Ben

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