My Wishful Heart.

Beautiful wishes for the one you love-lovely write-

Shanky, i liked this. So much emotion within that's personal to you I feel but that is also relatable tp so many people.

My heart is inflated,
with emotions
that I wish to empty.
^^
I love this opening because it reminds me of a balloon full of air that awaits being popped (because it usually happens) but full of something inside that will make people happy or sad like a note from afar.

How I wish
that,
wishes were horses,
^^
Now that would be good because instead of wishing and hoping you could jump on, saddle up and ride to where your wish was. Lovely.

I would have you by my side
and never let you go.
Make you grow
and let your beauty glow
in the eyes of companions
enemies
friends
and family.
^^
I like the subtle rhymes here. I think all of us would be happy to have someone that makes us happy and show them off.

Make you happy
fall in love
and have much peace.
^^
Lovely ending to a beautiful piece. Inner peace I think comes with happiness and love amongst other things

Take care, Em