My Wishful Heart.

by DarkLight   May 12, 2016


My heart is inflated,
with emotions
that I wish to empty.

How I wish
that,
wishes were horses,

I would have you by my side
and never let you go.
Make you grow
and let your beauty glow
in the eyes of companions
enemies
friends
and family.

Make you happy
fall in love
and have much peace.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful wishes for the one you love-lovely write-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Shanky, i liked this. So much emotion within that's personal to you I feel but that is also relatable tp so many people.

    My heart is inflated,
    with emotions
    that I wish to empty.
    ^^
    I love this opening because it reminds me of a balloon full of air that awaits being popped (because it usually happens) but full of something inside that will make people happy or sad like a note from afar.

    How I wish
    that,
    wishes were horses,
    ^^
    Now that would be good because instead of wishing and hoping you could jump on, saddle up and ride to where your wish was. Lovely.

    I would have you by my side
    and never let you go.
    Make you grow
    and let your beauty glow
    in the eyes of companions
    enemies
    friends
    and family.
    ^^
    I like the subtle rhymes here. I think all of us would be happy to have someone that makes us happy and show them off.

    Make you happy
    fall in love
    and have much peace.
    ^^
    Lovely ending to a beautiful piece. Inner peace I think comes with happiness and love amongst other things

    Take care, Em