Comments : Friends for life

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Naomi

    What a lovely dedication, delivered delicately and with a purrrfect little ending; very quirky!
    When people let us down, pets rarely do.

    Great stuff,


  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Naomi, this is lovely. A beautiful dedication to your 'fur loves.'

    Whispering softly
    into your ear as I cry.
    You sit and listen.
    This is a lovely opening but sad that you are sad. Our true friends will definitely sot and listen through our happiness and sadness.

    Cuddling close to me
    hanging on every word said.
    Looking with sad eyes.
    I like this part as there seems to be a twist as in why would a friend cuddle close and hang onto your every word but then it dawned on me, maybe its a friend with benefits (that was my original thought.)

    I love you so much.
    Always there when I need you!
    Fur-ever my pets.
    I then read the ending and what a true twist and beautiful ending, one which pet owners can relate too. I do not have any pets but my mums dogs always listen when I'm sad lol.

    Lovely, all the best.

    • 5 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Em.
      Ive actually got a close bond with my cats - as said before. Its almost as if they know I rescued them from a certain fate of death at the pound. They just sit and listen and cuddle.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Naomi, such a lovely write- pets are the most amazing creatures. They ask for so little but in return they give you their all. That's true love. Your ending was spot on-

  • 5 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    So we have got another Aussie.
    Very well written in respect of the pets. People those have pets do such stuffs. You have described the pain in a very realistic way.
    Short but very effective. Well done.

    All the best pal.

    - Augastus Black.

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Sweet Write.

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved it am a sucker for animal poetry :) cats and dogs are such characters and far more intelligent than a lot of humans give them credit for Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I agree milly :)
      Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and comenting

  • 5 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Rather brilliant, if I do say. A beautiful triplet, and wonderful underlying meaning -- sometimes your best friends are ones who don't even speak your language.

    Much love,

  • 5 years ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    A pet's love is unconditional. :) Lovely triplet, thanks for sharing!