Dragonfire (Senryu)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Sep 22, 2016


Heavy metal breath
Liquid fire in my mouth
Like wrath incarnate

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, nice senryu. Loved the subject, very cool.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great senryu, Jessica.

    In regards to 'fire', I know in England it's one, but I am also aware that it does differ throughout different countries. It's one of those awkward ones.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    A wonderful senryu.
    Wonderful imagery.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Jessica ,

    what a nice little piece.
    senryu usually formed 5-7-5 syllabus/syllable

    perfection

    Gel

    • 9 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      Thanks, quite sure it is 5-7-5. :) Fire can either be one or two syllables - in this case, two.

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