Harvest time (Haiku)

Colorful! In just three lines you have brought the color of the changing season...nice.

Im standing under that tree, catching apples!

Love this haiku!

Michael, lovely haiku! Fall is my favorite season and your poem describes it to a T.

Michael

This really is a genuinely stunning haiku from you. I know compliments can be thrown around left, right and centre on this site, but this is beautiful.
Words like 'crisp', 'fruit' and 'furl' make this a truly...scrumptious! that's it - a Scrumptious little read! an absolute pleasure that cheered me immensely!

Lovely, lovely work.

Ben

Michael Hello,

Such a beautiful description and so succinctly put.
like Em says i too love to crunch those crispy leaves, rather stamp and do a hopscotch dance....

But the kind of landscape that you are describing, the range of colours of autumn leaves and ripe fruits ready to fall into your laps... is something i have only seen on postcards....what i am witnessing right now-is heavy rains slashing down my window pane. It is still monsoon and green out here....

enjoyed your poem :) thank you.

Jay