Mind

by sofia   Dec 2, 2016


Close your eyes,
loose your mind,
you will find
the path beyond
space and time.

See the eternal life-death dance
of planets and stars
Tip-toeing assist
to the history's victories
and defeats.

Cross with a space ship
the invisible system of atoms
Have a walk leagues
and phatoms
under the sea.

Close your eyes,
loose your mind,
You will find
the path beyond
dream and life.

You will be a drop of water in the ocean,
You will be a flame on fire
You will be beyond the mire
of boredom and sadness.
You will be PURE EMOTION

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely imagery.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sofia,

    I don't need to close my eyes, I just have a few glasses of wine and that seems to do the trick, lol.

    Wonderful write, full of great visuals.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by sofia

      Thank you so much. Didn't thought it would have been so effective

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Excellent try here, I must say. Enjoyed the deft rhymes, at some point. Close your eyes, lose your mind, OBSERVE. There's no doubt at all, you'll get there.

    • 7 years ago

      by sofia

      Thank you.

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