Comments : An Auzzie Summer

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi,

    This is lovely. No messing around, just cutting straight to the point in three lines that set a perfect scene. However, in the midst of an English winter, I am loathed to like it too much... :)

    Nominated

    Take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Wow! Thankyou Benny.. really ! And until you have an auzzie xmas you havent lived! A nice warm day. Wake up to presents followed by a bbq lunch.. lots of fresh salads and seafoods.. fresh prawns and oysters!
      Then an arvo of full tummys at the beach relaxing as the nieces and nefews and cousins play in the water and sand.. then leftovers for dinner (if it can fit!) Haha few local beers and wines :) perfection!
      You have to try it!

      Sorry for rambling. :) thank you for the nomination!

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hmmmn love the scene Naomi I can smell the bbq. .

    Well done;)

    Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi,

    I know longer enjoy reading your comments...lol

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Lol sorry Benny. Your always welcome here though!

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    Is this what you mean by Auzzie?
    http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Auzzie

    Interesting term, to say the least.

    Nice content though, I am a big fan of the haiku form.

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Ether! Interesting indeed. I actually meant Auzzie as in Australian.. :) its where I am. So our xmas is summer.
      Thanks for reading!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    I love this :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    N, your beautiful haiku brings so many wonderful memories of summer pasts-well done my friend!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Naomi,

    Waking up to a cold dark drissly day I needed a tonic. Thank you, this poem hit the spot nicely.

    Take care,

    Michael x

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sounds like something I would enjoy. Not so much fan of barbecued though but the company and the warmt of summer, I would very much.

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    I do believe it is "Aussie", not "Auzzie". That's what I was trying to get at with my last comment, but I was apparently too vague.

    - from a fellow native Australian.

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Lol thanks. I guess we always put z's..
      All my mates and I do it.

      We are bogans lol bloody south auzzies