Passion (Etheree)

by Kasie   Jan 5, 2017


Love,

weilds a

lustrous glow

of white passion,

launching sparks into

one's own body and soul

pulsing warm sensations of

electric waves from head to toe.

thy experience of true loves flame,

is nothing short of ecstasy and bliss.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, wonderfully done, love the layout and you really nailed how love is to a T. Well done-

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Lovin' the changes :D

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful.

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Kasie,

    You must have been reading my mind. This form will feature in our first workshop.

    I like these forms, not only for the technical aspect, but, also for the visual pleasure.

    I wonder if you could write another or tweak this one to produce a nice looking triangle? Not only will you need to count syllables, make sure the theme makes sense, but also the size of each word. :D

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I will work on it. This was actually my first attempt at one. I'm trying to branch out into other styles of poetry.

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    The word choice is marvelous here.

    Don't know about this kind of form, but the poem is truely of high level. Seems like you have written the whole nature of the sea of love.

    A very handsome, adorable and cool write. 5/5.

    • 9 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

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