Wow, this says to me that you yearn for this person you lust after even love to notice you and sometimes its hard when someone gets so under your skin yet doesn't even look our way..
Fantastic write

An intriguing write that will receive my nomination later...if I remember!

Take care and all the best,

Ben

Reading previous comments I agree, but it speaks to me of something a little more animalistic.

Short sweet and very powerful

Regards

Craig

Very different and very inviting and at the same time there is
a hint of passion lurking in the lines that it comes out without saying too
much. Your choice of words and the way it is penned takes my imagination
to far off places...very nice!

Amazing write! Well done :)

Nice work, MaryAnne!

True intimacy requires courage, but is the deepest level possible between two people.

Love, Ingrid xxx

Sensual write Ms Piano
PPx

I love this style short to a sensual point.