Insects can swim and turtles can fly,
I'm in love oh (sigh...)
***

^^

The whole write is beautifully penned, Gel, but I really do like this line. Lovely poem.

All the best as ever,

Ben

You are merciless for giving me this feeling,
It bounced off the lower ground up to the highest ceiling,

This bit really got me, so low and so high. To just be in the middle.

Beautiful witting

Good job Gel, it took be back to that time of experiencing a first love. The range of emotions, flying high by just hearing her voice, hitting the floor when she made another choice.
5/5
Ken

Beautiful piece of art

Gel this is freaking awesome, word choice etc is spot on throughout and your metaphors are excellently executed

Awesome job!

Ben

Shamazing! That is all Xx

Glad to be back xx

Wow again Gel! I love your forms. It's breathtaking! This one is as Em says it is...Shamazing!