Comments : The Enemy

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel, this is excellent. Nominated.

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi Ben, thank you for your appreciation and for the nomination. :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    I love this. 'She died in between her eyes and the mirror'. So beautifully put

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Glad you loved it, Ms. Angela. :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful piece Miss M
    well done

    Michael :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wonderful piece! Well done. Im glad its been nominated :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Dearest Lady! This is an amazing write by you! Excellent job!

    (<3)^Click!

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      My dear Cowgirl, thank you! And I miss you! :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is so relatable it's unbelievable

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Deep stuff lurks in those spaces, the minds image creates a seeming reality that is too hard to bear. Good work Mel. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    WELL DONE!! Miss M, rely pleased for you

    Michael :)

  • 8 years ago

    by RustySoul

    Great write Mel Liz. Congratulations on the win!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Congrats beautiful Lady!! So happy to see this on the front page today!! :) *dances*

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Yay, I love your dance! Thank you dear Cowgirl!

      And thank you Michael and Rusty!

  • 8 years ago

    by Nicko

    Hi Mel Liz, congrats on your win, great to see you on the the front page. Lovely poem, well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by Alex Penuelas

    This is awesome!

  • 8 years ago

    by nani

    A VERY well deserved win! I absolutely love this!

    Nani :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Wow what a great poem

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you so very much Alex, Nani and Mahesh!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    JUDEGS COMMENT:
    The enemy by mossgirl19 4 points
    To me this needs recognising because in my opinion it'll resonate with atleast a quarter of us on the site as I have come across many that write (some daily) about depression and the feelings they feel but this is done in the most simplest way which is rather intriguing to me to see and I think it's a pretty raw and personal view on how this poetess' perceives themselves unfortunately. I love the spacing too because it's done in a way that makes you pause? for breath and gives you time to digest what has been written