Comments : CAN YOUR KAT OR DAWG TALK?

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hahaha...this is so cool and totally fun, Ken! You just 'slayed' it again! I love every single line of this craftily rhymed piece about the talking kitty and the old flea-bitten doggy...hehehe. Added to my favorites!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel says this is 'craftily rhymed'. Agreed, and so - from this moment on - you are now 'Crafty Ken'. Not jus because of this piece, but because you weave rhyme and humour so effortlessly in so many poems.

    All the best...Crafty, lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey Ken, you old dawg haha!

    What a lovely story, as always. And yes I agree crafty Ken
    Always enjoy your tales, but this I was rather curious haha

    Great piece fella

    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Michael and all others, I'm in a rush now, wife is on her way home with a big thunderstorm giving her a big tailwind. I have to move some items in our one car garage for her to drive in, hopefully not drive through as she has a prescription windsheild-He He, Be back tomorrow morning, Chow!

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Michael, my new Profile Handle is now "Crafty Ken".

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Very enjoyable light hearted tale. A feline masterpiece Loved it Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Never underestimate the underdog
    Though he may not look like much
    A Shabby, scruffy lazy old beast
    And you still love to scratch his luggs.

    Kitty cats are pretty
    But they're sneaky and they're sly
    You can not really trust them
    Their intentions they do hide

    He may no longer be fleet of foot
    But there's life in the old dog yet
    Your loyal guardian on all those walks
    The bond between man and dog is best.

    Bugger you cat people dogs rock cats are like like Celine dion. Lol

    Ps dude luggs=British slang for ears mainly a northern thing

    Loved the poem was proper funny

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Wow Craig, you are indeed like an intellectual Steed, so much from your prose, it's like the love of a Bee for a Rose! Nice comments!
      I just heard a quote; It's great when you meet a perfect person but when you are in Love it doesn't matter!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I'm back on this page and I am having a really good time reading this again!

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Glad you're having "Seconds", you reading it twice is nice. Thanks Mel for the Nomination!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is a fantastic piece that gave me the laugh I so needed recently

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Awesome awesome awesome! Loved reading this! Well done!

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ren, my new friend, stay tuned, Crafty Ken has more just around the bend.
      By the way, I did write a sad poem after I had seen my neighbor walking his two Irish Setters, one young and one very old, I think I named it; It's sad when they go but I also wrote a cute dog lover poem called; The heart stealer. Glad that you like my offbeat poetry.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your HM, Crafty Ken!

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      And thank you Mel for nominating it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This reminds me of the Enid Blyton books and stories, it's very entertaining and suitable for children. To be honest I don't have the capacity to enjoy such stories now, but it brings back fond childhood memories.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crafty Ken, I'm pm glad you've made it clear that cats trump dogs in the intelligence stakes ;-)
    A brilliant and funny poem!
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    "Can Your Kat Or Dawg Talk?" By Ken 4 points.

    It's been a week of really heavy reading, so many tales of heartache and woe. As writers this is a thing we do and it is accepted.

    And then this (excuse the poor grammar by starting a sentence with and)

    And then this beautiful, nonchalant, indulgent poem.

    It was a beautiful break from the norm which gained a massive smile from me and on a darker day it was very very uplifting.

    Thank you for the beautiful imagery and the smiles.

    Well done (4)

    • 5 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks CJ, I don't recall if I had replied to you eight months ago, if not thank you for your great comments! Ken