Awwwww...as in awwwww, this is very heart-warming and made me wanna cry! So very sweet.

Beautiful heart warming piece

It was as if I was there present throughout this moment! Beautifully described
with all the emotions packed into it...a memorable day...lovely and Congrats on
the Win!

This is unbelievably nice....
Well penned.
Congratulations.
~S

Judging comment

"Worth the wait" By Kips 7 points

This is a beautiful write and it took me back to that day so so many years ago.

To be reminded of that kiss in front of that alter left me with a lasting smile.

The poem itself flows really well and keeps the reader absorbed, it is like a well formed short story, with a beautiful beginning, middle and end.

Simply lovely (7)