Comments : A Lullaby

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful - can only show appreciation by nominating. Well done

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I agree this is pretty.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Written as a gestured gift to a sleepless friend, thankyou all for commenting

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh Mark! This is stunning! Lyrical and wistful ... so very sweet. Bloomin' brilliant :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Mark

    What a lovely lullaby with wonderful imagery,
    really enjoyed reading this fella

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Mark I know this was meant for me joking aside this is beautiful and I could imagine it being sung as a real lullaby though I'll leave the singing to you haha

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, this is just lovely! The visuals are so relaxing, almost makes me want to drift off too. Well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    So beautiful, Mark. Yes this is relaxing and I just yawned...hehe. Lovely language in here again...

  • 6 years ago

    by Mini

    Adorable it is!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful, adding to my favorites.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on this weeks win with A Lullaby a beautiful imaginative write. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Well done Mark on front page win, with your beautiful lullaby

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A really well deserved win Mark, congratulations! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations, Mark! :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, congratulations on your win!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations Mark. I already added it to my favorites.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Thankyou kitty, Mel, free verse & brenda and Michael for your kind comments! And support for my poems in general. Also must thank Nam's, without her - no lullaby :)

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - congrats on the win :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sweet and so tenderly penned. I could visualize
    you singing this to a little girl..a lovely read and
    Congrats on the Win!!