Comments : Another petal falls (dedicated to a close friend)

  • 6 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Damn.... what a powerful piece.... wow... amazing

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Fredy, lovely words :)

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I have no suitable words for this Michael.

    Gobsmacked and wow are all I need say

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Craig
      Lovely comments fella :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Damn Michael! A powerful write! I felt the hits with each line. Well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda,
      Yes it has a powerful theme!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I just love the way you structure your poems and the writing is as powerful as it should be.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse
      Very kind words :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ouch! Your use of language here fits the theme so brilliantly ... the sad message heard loud and clear ... it's brilliant Michael! x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      Yes there is a noise to this one...sadly
      x

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Michael this resounded deep. You know what I mean. I really hope this grace the front page this time.

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael!
    Dam... This is deep.. love the layout. and the content.. well done. glad its nominated!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Yes I'm pleased you felt 'you know what I mean' :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams x:)