Mark, wow, this one reads like a classic poem! The tone and rhyming here is really beautiful. I wish I had a nomination left, this deserves to be nominated.

Beautiful, romantic piece. Wonderfully creative definitely needs a nomination. A real pleasure to read. As you can guess Im a huge romantic. Milly x

Mark
This is a stunning piece from you. The use of wonderful words, making this a truly romantic poem
Well done
Michael :)

Thankyou poets for your comments. Thankyou Milly for your nomination

Mark
I feel the love resonating from this piece. Lucky partner you have!! Oh if only we could all live by the sea.

Glad its nominated.

Now who's the master of rhyme Mark? Lol
Brilliant!
Ps ... are you a time traveller? Really from the days of yore but stuck in the 21st century? I think so ;-)
=^.^=

Mark, this is pure art.
You really are a time traveler.
Very beautiful.

Added to favorites.

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Beautiful add to my favorite. Take cate

Wow. A timeless piece of wonder.

Mark, this is just lovely! Nicely rhymed throughout. Well done!

Absolutely beautiful Mark

Love this poem is beautiful! Great Job!!

This made me want to keep reading more! Forreal.. I love the metaphoric prases used in here. Brings the writing to life even more, in my opinion. Wtbs, also adding this to my favs as well. Please, don't stop writing.

Also, thank you for all your kind comments (:

JUDGING COMMENT:
How Joyous It Would Be by Mark points 7
Here we have yet another astounding piece by Mark one that oozes with his love for a special person and a longing that this person would feel the same and he gets his happy ending. Everything about this just flows perfectly, the words, the beat of the piece and the rhyming.