Comments : How Joyous It Would Be

  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mark, wow, this one reads like a classic poem! The tone and rhyming here is really beautiful. I wish I had a nomination left, this deserves to be nominated.

  • 3 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful, romantic piece. Wonderfully creative definitely needs a nomination. A real pleasure to read. As you can guess Im a huge romantic. Milly x

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    Mark
    This is a stunning piece from you. The use of wonderful words, making this a truly romantic poem
    Well done
    Michael :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Mark

    Thankyou poets for your comments. Thankyou Milly for your nomination

  • 3 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark
    I feel the love resonating from this piece. Lucky partner you have!! Oh if only we could all live by the sea.

    Glad its nominated.

  • 3 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Now who's the master of rhyme Mark? Lol
    Brilliant!
    Ps ... are you a time traveller? Really from the days of yore but stuck in the 21st century? I think so ;-)
    =^.^=

  • 3 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Mark, this is pure art.
    You really are a time traveler.
    Very beautiful.

    Added to favorites.

    S s...

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful add to my favorite. Take cate

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wow. A timeless piece of wonder.

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, this is just lovely! Nicely rhymed throughout. Well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely beautiful Mark

  • 3 years ago

    by Brise

    Love this poem is beautiful! Great Job!!

  • 3 years ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    This made me want to keep reading more! Forreal.. I love the metaphoric prases used in here. Brings the writing to life even more, in my opinion. Wtbs, also adding this to my favs as well. Please, don't stop writing.

    Also, thank you for all your kind comments (:

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    How Joyous It Would Be by Mark points 7
    Here we have yet another astounding piece by Mark one that oozes with his love for a special person and a longing that this person would feel the same and he gets his happy ending. Everything about this just flows perfectly, the words, the beat of the piece and the rhyming.