Comments : First sight

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a beautifully romantic poem. I truly believe true love heals all wounds in time because love is unconditional. This piece takes us through the dark and brings us out into the sunshine. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Really well written and so lovely yet so sad all at the same time!

    I agree with Milly, true love can heal so much. x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is so sweet. Love can often be an alien emotion; a person can feel unworthy of it, even not knowing how it feels. This is love in early blossom; a love building into a huge grand garden on love. Best of luck for best of love - you deserve the happiness and security it can bring. X

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi, as Kitty says, a sad piece in so many ways, but tinged with the colours of a rainbow too...and maybe a little treasure at the end there!

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    your answer was so sincere
    Rays of sunlight appeared through stormy clouds above..

    So what was the answer
    You whispered without hesitation..
    Simple..

    "The day I knew I loved you, was the very first time we met"..

    Just loved this poem, especially this part.
    To my list of favorites.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Nams, this is so wonderful! Love is an amazing thing and when we have that someone special to share it with=priceless! I'm so happy for you-

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ahhhhh...ayeee...this is so sweet, Nams!!! It is really a joy to have someone accept and love us for who we are. We all have our weaknesses, but love does see past thru them. Happy for you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful Nams. Like free verse, I just adore the last stanzas, perfect ending for this piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    My frozen heart is thawed

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams,

    This is a heart-felt piece from you, with emotions flowing all the way through. I especially like the two lines of 'but to me each mall step,
    feels like the winning goal'

    A really enjoyable piece and worthy of my nomination :0
    Much love
    Michael x

  • 6 years ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    send chills in my spines.... very nice words and the burst of full blown emotion in one great masterpiece