Comments : Impressions On This Land:

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This was interesting to read, the format felt a little boring but that's probably just me. The flow was okay and the rhymes were alright. I like the direction the author was trying to venture in.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mark

    Search for happiness and the meaning of life leaving 'impressions on this land.' Beautiful Scott, great to read another poem from you.

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An optimistic piece with the treasure map to happiness. Most enjoyable piece. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Scott, very well you explained the true purpose of our life and how to be or remain happy through out this journey called life.

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The journey of life you described it in a wonderful way. All the best.

  • 4 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comment

    "Impressions Of This Land" By Scott Cole 10 points.

    I found this poem by scott to a rather compelling piece with a simple message.

    If I read it correctly and I hope I do.

    Nothing can be planned to perfection. You must experience life. It follows no plan or thought. Sometimes things will just happen. Sometimes good, sometimes bad.
    Whichever way it turns out we must deal with it.

    How we deal with it, is the important part! Regardless of what we will do, or do not do, we will leave a footprint. Something that someone will always remember and something that will affect.

    Yes we may stumble along the way, But still what do you miss if you don't even try?

    Structurally I found the flow to be almost perfect and the way it carried through from start to finish encapsulating.

    Thank you (10)