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            Wow Craig!  This is powerful stuff and could have so many hidden meanings pertaining to perhaps, powerful people too. I guess we all begin as rivulets, but few make it to the sea ... and what do they do with that power once they get there? | 
by CJ Maleney
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            Thank you. | 
by CJ Maleney
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            Thanks Ben. | 
 
    by Ben Pickard
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            Craig, I love this! It is the little things and experiences we accumulate throughout the years (or tributaries) that make us stronger. (Roaring seas). I don't know whether the metaphors I have highlighted were meant or whether this is just a fun poem, but that's what I'm taking...so there! | 
| Lovely, clever, effervescent write! Love love this poem! | 
by CJ Maleney
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            Thank you. | 
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            Craig - wonderful, wonderful *claps*  | 
by mossgirl19
| I love this too, Craig. Life's a journey, along the way we grow into better versions of our selves...or we make something out of the very tiny bits of what we have. Being the sea now I guess you mean to say you are now an overcomer. :-) | 
by CJ Maleney
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            Thank you Mel.  This one isn't really about me. | 
| Loved this and the way the little droplet grows slowly as it journeys into the sea. Very clever and captivating piece. Milly x | 
by CJ Maleney
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            Morning Milly | 
by Alice
| Really like this one! |