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by Milly Hayward
Nice rhyming and an alternative Santa with conflicting agenda. Would make a good movie. Most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x
by CJ Maleney
Thank you Mills.
If it ever was a movie it would be one I would deffo watch.
by Ben Pickard
Great twist on the traditional Christmas eve deliveries! Well done, Craig.
All the best
Ya know the way I think by now I love to look at things from a different angle.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Haha ... trademark 'twisty-Craig' ;-)
Love it! :-) x
Got have a little twist my dear lol
Haha! I agree with Miss Kitty,
This has your name all the way through fella
Thanks dude I think lol.
Glad you liked
by Kevin M
Really good piece!!! From the first lines to the end I was hooked and I really didn't want it to end! 10/10
Thank you so much
by Lyical Madness
Craig, fascinating twist with this. I was reading and going: "ooooh this is creepy." I liked it a lot, you never really think of there being checks and balances with Santa-