Comments : By Storm

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    A very profound piece with great rhyme and a thought provoking message

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The truth so well spoken

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh Matt this is brilliant! Wise, wise words indeed. Have you ever read 'Desiderata'? It's along the same profound lines as this.
    Adding to my faves! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 years ago

      by Matt Carroll

      I just did, and it is phenomenal. Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Matt,

    as a believer in fate, this had me hooked all the way through. I like the way you have expressed how things could turn out, in a great flowing format.
    Well done and I will nominate this.
    Michael :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Breathtakingly good. Full of wisdom a smooth rhyming flowing piece. So glad its been nominated. Best wishes Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Great poem with a good message!

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Great write here, Matt.