This is amazingly strong poetry You like abby do not write often but when you do they are amazing.
The mood , the questioning flow that like the sea waves roll on one another and the last one that touches your eye on the sand or on the feet of the reader is fantastic.
This poem has a strong inner rhythm.

Dear Jane in the spirit of authenticity I do not like compliment or flattery. I try not to do that to others what I do not wish for myself. So if I compliment this is only because the poem really is great. No any other consideration.

I really enjoyed the concept of using the moon and earth as metaphors for love. A unique and captivating piece. Best wishes Milly x

Very unique and interesting. All the best

wow! Jane,

I absolutely love this piece, such an incredible poem, and receives my full nomination.

Much love
Michael :)x

An interesting love story narrated with such vividness!
Liked your choice of words and the yearning which unfolds
from line to line. Beautiful!!

Congrats on your win

Congratulations on ur win!!!!

Jane, congratulations on your win! Your visuals are quite lovely.

Congratulations silvershoes...

Jane :0

I'm so pleased this is hat I am reading on the front page. Well done, this is one poem that struck a poets chord!
Much love
Michael :)x

A beautiful, strong piece, Jane. Congrats on your win!

I can only contently sigh after reading this. I know it's been a few months since you've posted a poem, and this truly soothed my soul. The ease and flow of nature, the untold stories of longing. The brevity is so lovely.

Congrats on the win! :)

Congrats on the Win!!!!

There was somethibg striking about this poem as a whole but for me it was the first few lines that stood out. There really is something haunting about this piece. A thoroughly enjoyable read yet painful too. It's emotional and very raw.

As you are aware, Jane, I was...ahem...away when this piece deservedly took its position on the front page, but just know that I have read it and appreciated it; it is a wonderful piece of work, truly.

All the best as ever,

Ben

Judging comment:

An extraordinary love story between two celestial beings. The beauty of love, its yearning and longing, and the pain of its non-reciprocity sum up to form one of the most beautiful love stories I have read here. There's beauty in romance, but there's much more in one-sided love (more than what the eye can see) and this love has been portrayed flawlessly in your poem. Beautiful.
Congratulations.

Breathtaking.....added to favs :)

B x