by ddavidd
This is amazingly strong poetry You like abby do not write often but when you do they are amazing. |
by silvershoes
You know, I have not read any of these comments until now, and it makes me so very sad. I wish I saw this sooner. |
I really enjoyed the concept of using the moon and earth as metaphors for love. A unique and captivating piece. Best wishes Milly x |
by silvershoes
Thank you, Milly. |
Very unique and interesting. All the best |
by silvershoes
Thank you! All the best to you as well. |
by Michael
wow! Jane, |
by silvershoes
Michael, thank you dearly for this and your other comment. To be honest, I am in such a sad, hollow place when I submit poetry, I do not read the comments. It’s too raw. But reading them now, I regret that I waited. Thank you again for your kindness. |
by Meena Krish
An interesting love story narrated with such vividness! |
by silvershoes
Thank you, dear Meena <3 |
Congrats on your win |
by Scott Cole
Congratulations on ur win!!!! |
by silvershoes
Thanks!! |
by Brenda
Jane, congratulations on your win! Your visuals are quite lovely. |
by silvershoes
Thank you, sweet Brenda. |
by naaz
Congratulations silvershoes... |
by silvershoes
<3 |
by Michael
Jane :0 |
by mossgirl19
A beautiful, strong piece, Jane. Congrats on your win! |
by silvershoes
Thank you so much :) |
I can only contently sigh after reading this. I know it's been a few months since you've posted a poem, and this truly soothed my soul. The ease and flow of nature, the untold stories of longing. The brevity is so lovely. |
by silvershoes
Thank you, MA. I know I’m late, but thank you. There are long stretches between my writes nowadays. |
by Meena Krish
Congrats on the Win!!!! |
There was somethibg striking about this poem as a whole but for me it was the first few lines that stood out. There really is something haunting about this piece. A thoroughly enjoyable read yet painful too. It's emotional and very raw. |
by silvershoes
Thank you so much. |
by Ben Pickard
As you are aware, Jane, I was...ahem...away when this piece deservedly took its position on the front page, but just know that I have read it and appreciated it; it is a wonderful piece of work, truly. |
by silvershoes
I am very happy that you enjoyed this poem! Thank you :) |
by gumshuda
Judging comment: |
by silvershoes
What a generous, kind comment. Thank you! |
by Ben
Breathtaking.....added to favs :) |